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秋の子 ・ あきのこ ・ 秋季的孩子 ・ Autumn's Child

Child of Autumn, bringing wind.
Foreseeing the icy tint.
Whispers softly as if warning.
The cold, chilly evenings nearing.


- Me (Jensweetart)

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Edit: I know I've said this before, but you guys really are AWESOME. TTUTT Thank you to everyone who faves or enjoys my work! >U<

Edit #2: I added a bit more glow to the Girl's eyes. I'm not sure whether it makes it look better or worse, but I like the glowiness. XD)


Hello everyone!

LOOK, I'VE FINALLY FINISHED IT!!! :nuu:

I thought I wasn't going to make it... OTL

It was supposed to be a simple drawing, as a experiment, I guess. But then my annoying preference of not leaving the back ground blank got to me. And it was painful.

Sorry for the carppy background, (Derp trees and grass, why you so difficult! (/O-O)/ ) I don't like to draw them, since I'm not really all that good at them, but I hope it's acceptable. :iconruncryplz: Take it as an experiment too! XD

I need to start being able to put up with simpler backgrounds, otherwise I'm going to die of frustration. orz

I hope you like this though (I've put enough work into it! QAQ) and the little poem. (It was completely random though, I just thought it up while drawing it. The Chinese and Japanese titles really don't have a purpose either - I just wanted to practice a little. XD)

BTW, this is also a part of my 'Season's Turn' Project. Since I've put so much effort into it, might as well include it as one. I haven't drawn something for the Project for a while anyway, so I guess it was worth the pain. XD

:star:Thank you for viewing! Comments, faves and critiques appreciated! (Especially on the background. ^^;):star:

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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

uwaaaaaa 0u0 it's so pretty that I couldn't resist writing a critique!!!

Good: I love the use of colour and lighting in this piece, a beautiful composition and also idea!!! The warmth of autumn is contrasted by a slightly cold green pair of mesmerizing eyes and it's so nice and cozy! Her expression is beautiful, as well as the shading on her clothes and the small details of lace in this piece!!! I don't even know how you did the painterly leaves on the ground xD *teach me >w<* Holy gosh...how did you draw feet 0.0

Improvements: Overall the artwork is very grey in tone value, not a lot of dark areas to being out the character in the middle. Maybe work on adding darker shadows in some areas to really bring out her character as well as the beautiful scenery. The trees in the background could have more detail and outline as well as darker shadows. The trees don't look like they're on the ground, but rather, floating. More defined shadows for the trees and ground will improve this ^^

Overall, this is an amazing improvement >w< Can't wait to see your new works!